I think you have already sent me this poem Claire!
Hello Claire nice to meet you!I really like your water poem,it includes a lot of adjectives and adverbs you really should aim to get more done other than that its amazing!!
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Good work on the poem and next time put a full stop at the end. Please look at my schools blog benedict primary school
Brilliant adjectives. I love how you mached them. I wish you could make it longer so I can read more. Keep it on.
I like your poem but it needs a bit more inspiration and has to be a bit longer,however I like the picture and what you wrote so far.
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I think you have already sent me this poem Claire!
Hello Claire nice to meet you!I really like your water poem,it includes a lot of adjectives and adverbs you really should aim to get more done other than that its amazing!!
I hope you appreciated my comments.
Would you mind looking at my school’s blog and commenting on some of ours?
http://benedict-primary-school.j2webby.com/?p=1696
Thank you.
Good work on the poem and next time put a full stop at the end. Please look at my schools blog benedict primary school
Brilliant adjectives. I love how you mached them.
I wish you could make it longer so I can read more.
Keep it on.
I like your poem but it needs a bit more inspiration and has to be a bit longer,however I like the picture and what you wrote so far.